My Draws

[HellooNurse]

[Akjosch]

Cool, you even have a DeviantArt page.

Good shading, but it needs to be "deeper" - don't be afraid of dark shadows! The left ear of "Ash" has this problem, for example.

Also, I think the proportions are slightly off here and there, but that's just a matter of practice - and your art style, obviously.

[HellooNurse]

Those draws are fair old thought xD. Look Ash date for example xD.

My style emproved a lot nowdays, based off on the Death Note style, very feel less mistakes now than I had in the past.

And remember, this is ANIME proporcions, so is IMPOSSIBLE not to be off for someone looking the style from outside. Comparing with real body proporcions is kind unfair.

The problem is that I have no time to draw, that why my Deviant don't had a update for more than a year =(

Last update was this:

*removed*

[Akjosch]

I don't mean the anime proportions (those I am familiar with), just mostly positioning of facial features. For example, in the comic you posted, upper right panel: Imagine the baseline sphere for the upper part of the head of the figure. Now look where the centre point and the vertical line going through it would be, and in which direction off it the eyes (middle of the eyes should be about halfway down the centre line) and the nose (ridge of the nose should be at the bottom of this imagined sphere) are facing:

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Sorry about not hitting the skull shape exactly, I didn't want to get out my Wacom so late in the evening.

This looks slightly skewed: The right eye is too far to the right (left for the viewer), the nose is too far to the left.

[HellooNurse]

Thank you for the hints Akj ^^, I know you are trying to help. But...

Just for the note:

This comic was published one year ago, like I said, I emproved xD

So, I find unfair you take my skills as artists as granted just for those draws. ^^

I don't taked seriously, I draw out of the blue, when I am was bored, so I don't use compass or any of the melimetric tools used for a draw be perfect. I not get paid either, why I should bother to go melimetric accurate? It's not a contest draw, it was a "out of boredom" draw,

Also, anime anathomy change from person to person. Or you think that the ears of the characters of Dragon Ball are not too big or their heads are not to tiny? xDDDDD

Btw Akj, should I ask you to draw something so I could see what you mean? Just draw a head. xD

Either way, since those draws are so old to show my skills, I will remove then and try in the future put better draws, that better reflect my recent skills.

[Akjosch]

Thank you for the hints Akj ^^, I know you are trying to help. But...

Just for the note:

This comic was published one year ago, like I said, I emproved xD

So, I find unfair you take my skills as artists as granted just for those draws. ^^

I don't, actually - and I didn't really comment on your artistic skills with the last part, just the technical aspects of the specific examples.

The thing is, know quite a few artists in real life (like Kim "Arki" Schneider, Sabine Weiss and so on - though I'm sure a few more of them have DeviantArt pages, just don't have time to find them ATM ), and I'm used to give them detailed critique of their work, both in the technical and artistic sense, though mostly technical (proportions, perspective, lights and shadows not matching up, stuff like this). I naturally do that to everyone who shows their work, to try and help them improve.

No point removing the drawings, BTW. At most, you should be putting notices about when you did them, to have a sense of progression.

I'll see what I can draw up later today to explain what I mean more clearly. Also, I'm curious about your newest projects. It's always a pleasure to see how the work of an artist progresses - especially the work-in-progress parts, what was tried, what was changed or which ideas abandoned, and why.

[Cheda]

Why did you removed the Dev site ?
Im a ex tattoo artist and LOVE drawnings even can help ya with right shaders stuff like that

[Fraou]

Why you always draw girls with boobs?

Are you a lesbian or something?

[Melvis]

Why you always draw girls with boobs?

Are you a lesbian or something?

I think it is because of anime style. In anime girls are always with enormous eyes and boobs.

[HellooNurse]

Why you always draw girls with boobs?

Are you a lesbian or something?

Would be weird they being GIRL's and have NO BOOBIES! Don't you agree?

Btw, Fraou, you don't understand about art. neither the term "Trying to appeal your demographic audience", and this have nothing to do with someone sexuality. It's not because an male author draws boys without shirt that he is gay, is because he trying to appeal the female demographic audience, with can be his main audience, like it was with me.

Also:

The Werewitch (second picture) boobs are not too big

The Warrior boobs (the blondie girl) are big in the game as well, so I was just fitting in character.