HellooNurse wrote:Thank you for the hints Akj ^^, I know you are trying to help. But...
Just for the note:
This comic was published one year ago, like I said, I emproved xD
So, I find unfair you take my skills as artists as granted just for those draws. ^^
I don't, actually - and I didn't really comment on your artistic skills with the last part, just the
technical aspects of the specific examples.
The thing is, know quite a few artists in real life (like
Kim "Arki" Schneider,
Sabine Weiss and so on - though I'm sure a few more of them have DeviantArt pages, just don't have time to find them ATM

), and I'm used to give them detailed critique of their work, both in the technical and artistic sense, though mostly technical (proportions, perspective, lights and shadows not matching up, stuff like this). I naturally do that to everyone who shows their work, to try and help them improve.
No point removing the drawings, BTW. At most, you should be putting notices about when you did them, to have a sense of progression.

I'll see what I can draw up later today to explain what I mean more clearly. Also, I'm curious about your newest projects. It's always a pleasure to see how the work of an artist progresses - especially the work-in-progress parts, what was tried, what was changed or which ideas abandoned, and why.